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Fade Appears

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Where to begin on this one except this took me ages to work on thats for sure ^^;, ohhh and I would like to offer my gratitude to :iconluna777: for giving me a new art program called Easy Paint Tool Sai, for helping me with learning how to use it and for inking it too when I messed up badly when saving the file I really appreciate it.

Anyway other then that allow me to introduce you to my newest character (based off of an anime antagonist I created but turned into anthro), out of randomness sake I decided to make her into an evil bunny XD. Fade is a being that exists on both the spiritual and physical plains of existence simultaneously, though to be honest I have not thought what motive would she have that would make her evil ^^;.

Hope you all enjoy Fade's design and the colouring cause I am quite proud of this one save for the bland background that looks really simple to look at ^^; comments would be appreciated too n_n.

Art and Fade - :iconfelousefarnayne:
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
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Here's some tips, I hope they help later <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="=)" title="=) (Smile)" />

One of the first things I noticed is how her right hand looks a little bit odd...The way her hand is placed, it should be her thumb facing back and her small finger facing us. The fingers are also all of the same size. It should be the front one bigger and the back ones a tad smaller. Try drawing your own hands into complicated positions. Hands are very hard to draw, so I say good luck with that. <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="=)" title="=) (Smile)" />

Her arms are also a bit off. Try to fold them a little so we can see there is an elbow. You can try to make a little more shapes in them too so they don't look like sticks. Same for the legs: thigh bigger, calf a little bigger than the leg itself too...

Her breasts also. You should try to make them a tad higher and a tad rounder. For her sides, you should try to make them more like \ /, it'd look more natural.

As for the background, try doing some color variations than just a plain black background. Since the character has very dark colors, it would catch the eye more (like the long back skirt, took me a while to find it)

I hope it will help you for your next pic. I think you'd be able to correct this one too. Just don't give up <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)" />