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Devil's Soul


(Music starts with soft piano music and soft operatic atmospherics in background and then fast paced guitar and drum tempo is played soon after)


Verse 1 (Volcalist sings lines with deep operatic soft voice and quite quickly with a pause between line 2 and 3)


These lands are too much for me
To live on free as the bird's open wings
All those times without the answer key
Are left unsolved after the bell rings


Bridge (Is sang tiny bit slower this point and is sang low)


We may find the other side
Beyond this reality we found
For good tidings of joy I hope
You will live without wishing another night


Verse 2 (Same as Verse 1)


All these creatures I dub human
Are only cruel and feeble as the children we raise
How can I forgive all of mankind that ran?
When the crowd shunned me just for the one phase


Bridge (Same as last Bridge but the last two lines are sang more higher)


We may find a place to hide
Behind the curtain where no ones around
Please try to help yourself to cope
For I am not the one to heal your sight


Chrous (Is sang high while music is played)


Of the world
That we easily forget and forgive
And leave behind whether we're right or wrong
In this doomed eternal world
Some of us may find we knew all along
That you have the mark of the devil's soul


(Small Instrumental with guitars at this point)


Verse 3 (Same as Verse 1)


I have found the paper that states
We are deemed unfit to decide much like our kin
Everyone is tied to their hates
And therefore leave many in the times of din


Bridge (Same as last Bridge but the last two lines are sang more higher)


We may find the other side
Beyond this reality we found
For good tidings of joy I hope
You will live without wishing another night


Chrous (Is sang high while music is played)


For the world
That we easily forget and forgive
And leave behind whether we're right or wrong
In this doomed eternal world
Some of us may find we knew all along
That you have the mark of the devil's soul


(Music is played a bit more and soon ends with guitars and drums)

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I know its not much but hope you all liked it and enjoyed it anyway a song writer's job is never done till all passion is lost, till next time readers.
This was written last year but decided to post it now due to lazyness XD anyway thought this up while listening to Guilty Gear's music from X2 Midnight Carnival Reload, hope you all like this song I wrote and everyone enjoys it. Yay first posting of this year :dance:

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:iconstormfeder:
StormFedeR Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
I like this one... taking it to favs... silently.. :ninja:
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:iconfelousefarnayne:
felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the fave really appreciate it ^^
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StormFedeR Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
If I use a little part of it to decorate a future draw's background, may I repay you with some draw that you want? (of course I'm also giving you the credits of the writting in the draw)
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felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
hmm well I wouldn't know what to ask for right now really so I don't mind you using it as long as I am given credit for the lines you are planning to use, besides I also hate to be a bother too ^^;
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StormFedeR Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
bother? Not at all. Thankyou for your kindness. When I get to use the fragment, besides of the credit, I think about something to give you.
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felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I lately have an obcession of a certain coupling that no one would draw due to it being a crossover type of thing but not sure if you do that sorta art romance you know ^^;
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StormFedeR Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Why don't you tell me so I can can add it to mi ninja misions scroll list? :XD:
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:iconfelousefarnayne:
felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe you know of Kaede from Negima and Jade from Tales of the Abyss? ^^;
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Sayuri-Amaya Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Written very nicely (: It looks great, nice song :D I like it *^-^*
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felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks glad you like it n_n
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GenesisComander Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008
great work fel! :hug:
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:iconfelousefarnayne:
felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks Gen :hug:
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GenesisComander Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008
you are very welcome Fel! keep up the great work ^w^
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EvyCrystal Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008  Professional General Artist
really nice brother :3 :hug:
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:iconfelousefarnayne:
felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks sis n_n :hug:
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JiyuFurblade Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008
Looks good sunshine foxy, you got great words and lyrics to write down. Keep on it. <^_^>
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felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks SweetyKittyFoxy *snuggles nad kisses your lips lightly*
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SoftMonKeychains Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
Great song, is hard to write lyrics but that ones sounds well and can´t imagine it rhytmn^^

These lands are too much for me
To live on free as the bird's open wings


Is my favourite part, is something that I want to feel lately!
See ya!
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:iconfelousefarnayne:
felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
hmmm that was a good opener I thought too, anyway thanks for the comment ^^
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Luke-the-F0x Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ooh mark of the devils soul, this really has a dark feeling to it. Somehow this reminds me of the rise of the Orcish hoard of Draenor who been corrputed by the forces of evil and found a way to another world which is called Azeroth where they get to fight humans hence the..We may find the other side
Beyond this reality we found
For good tidings of joy I hope
You will live without wishing another night
..yeah i'm too much influenced by Warcraft.
anyway great job mate.
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felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Warcraft? I never thought of it related to that great RTS series to be honest ^^; thanks for the comment
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CloudshadeZer0 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well done this song, dude. I like the words that yu used for. however, some lines don't rhyme, like in this bridge:
We may find the other side
Beyond this reality we found
For good tidings of joy I hope
You will live without wishing another night


Wings and rings, for example, yes, they rhyme. but this Bridge... lol No
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:iconfelousefarnayne:
felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe I wanted to be different with the bridges XD a little fact is the bridges on their own don't ryhme but together you can see a similar structure still no ryhme but you can see how it works hehe
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Gie Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008
It's really good =) I really like the bridges
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:iconfelousefarnayne:
felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I was pleased myself actually ^^; thanks for the comment
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Gie Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008
no problem =)
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DCLeadboot Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
All these creatures I dub human
Are only cruel and feeble as the children we raise
How can I forgive all of mankind that ran?
When the crowd shunned me just for the one phase


Retsubnad: Oh... that verse is about me... :sniff:
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:iconfelousefarnayne:
felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
you can guess that my evil side thought of this song XD anyway thanks for the comment ^^
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DCLeadboot Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Danbuster: Yeah, hehe...
*Dan puts an arm round Retsy, who's blubbing like a baby, and takes him off to comfort him*
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Frobman Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008   Filmographer
Pretty good and well done! I like it! Though I've forgotten what it was about.
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:iconfelousefarnayne:
felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe few do unless they read a few times XD anyway thanks Frob ^^
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the-seven-servers Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008
These lands are too much for me
To live on free as the bird's open wings
All those times without the answer key
Are left unsolved after the bell rings


I think thats my favorite part of the song :D it shows the freedom, but what to do with it? great ^^
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felousefarnayne Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
kinda but I kinda thought its to do with trying to live free but without answers sorta thing but I guess it can seen many ways eh? ^^; thanks for the comment :hug:
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